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It is very hot here in Croatia, I'm all sweaty although I'm in house the whole day... 
I actually only have three more finished chapters of TheGuardianWolves to upload. Currently. I am behind with the pictures for the story also. 

Because:
1.)  I borrowed four books from the library, a romantic novel about a love between an angel and a human girl, after we watched The Fallen movie. Honestly, the movie is better than the books, I don't like them, but since I started i will finish.
In my opinion, it seems like the writer was aiming to make something like Twilight, which I don't mind, but her explanations of the things happening in book reach from stupid, to illogical and bizarre in my opinion and that is what bothers me most. It is fantasy: things aren't meant to be realistic by hey:

 >You are in love with an angel, the world is coming to an end, and it because Somebody always has to be jealous on love birds.<  -__-  Wow. 

> So angels, you want free will. Then will you stand on the side of Lucifer or me God?<  / Can you even answer something like that without having a Free will at the start???
Daniel: Excuse me, but if I have to fight for something I won't fight for Lucifer or You. I only care about love...
Hello!?? So you are asked do you chose Lucifer and God and you say I choose love, nothing more important than love on world. 

Moving on: I don't know is the writer catholic or atheist but bringing in Bible motives like God, Lucifer , end of world and Lilith, Sodom and Gomorrah,  into a love novel is a Hello for me also. If you are religious: you don't do that. If you are not: don't use Bible's stuff for your out of place love story. 

Hello people, I'm Miss Sophia, I more than 200 years old and I have a hidden identity so nobody finds out I'm trying to kill Luce. But this book here could help her, so i am just going to burn it in the middle of library and set everything on fire by the way. because there is no other possible place to burn a book. Because i am that smart, over 200 years old. Facepalm. 

Lucifer: Hey Luce, i need Daniel to join my army. So can I convince you to simply kill yourself so he could do so? No? then I guess I will turn the time back, before the Angels have fallen on earth and erase all human history simply so you wouldn't be here and Danial can decide to follow me. / Such a smart angel isn't he...? Why kill one person when you can erase whole world first? 

Luce: hey world, an army of angels and demons is after me, the end of world is here, two handsome guys are killing them to protect me, but their hands are all bloody and it is disgusting. So I am just gonna yell on them and be mad. also, daniel wants me to stay in school under that barrier. But i am bored. So I am gonna take a bunch of people with me and go out while a army of professional killers is after me: I Don't care, This is my life! (The lives of people who don't have a clue about what is going on and are following me, don't count I guess? So long you have your life girl...!)

Oh Daniel, he is so perfect... He is simply perfect... The amount of time spent to describe Daniel's personality is actually barely existent. He just poops up on places and keeps saying You are what is most important for me on world. His habits, his interactions with other characters are simply poorly described.  Being the center of everything while actually doing pretty nothing: just being there and being very important for everybody while doing nothing except being a puppy who follows Luce around. And is supposed to be the most important angel in heaven. Somebody must have been bribed to employ him at the first place... 

This is me forcing myself to read these books till end. 

2.) I'm playing too much Riders of Icarus lately. I was banned even for a week. For having a >Cheat engine< open and i used it for a off-line game for speed up, just forgot to close it before I logged in. They accepted my excuse and un-locked it again. And standing up late. 


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It's hot in Lithuania, too, but tonight it rained so the heat is slowly going down. :meow:

I read The Fallen several years ago. I had no idea there was a movie!
The author clearly hasn't done enough research before writing (she insists women had roles at Shakespeare's plays when he was alive, which is obviously not true, because back then only men could be actors). :no: